Dra'kesh's Classroom

OOC: We will keep that for another time. For the present, work on grammar and proper sentence structure. Your style isn't bad and you've improved greatly. The other tutors and I have given you credit for that.

OCC : No moneys ?

OOC: >< I will save that comment for Edge to deal with. But I've ran out of time at present and must go to class. Review what you have done yesterday and give me a reply within the next little while.

OCC : YOu don't need to.. i can tell this to him in face to face outside...
He can't do anything to me... of course here on this forum he's da boss

Of course. Now if you please Dra'kesh, the lesson will continue. I would like another sample of your writing. It could be about anything; use what you've learned yesturday as a guide. If I see your writing fit, we will continue to the next part of our lesson.

Martin looked at the creepy girl , that showed up in few seconds before him and frowned "Go go you mumbledumble girl ! "

This is almost perfect. Although you could try to connect your sentence to make it flow a bit more smoothly.

Here is how I would have written it:

Martin looked at the creepy girl, who showed up in a few seconds before him, and frowned deeply. "Go, go you mumbledumble girl!"

Please note that a person is not a thing. We use who or whom, depending on the different situations. But this post is almost perfect. Keep up the good work.

I'm on training Every Tuesday and Thursday , so don't be mad at me

I'm not mad at you Desh. I'm just stating the basics. ^^ --------> If that will help.

Anyways, I won't be on until Saturday or Sunday. And as for the reason, you can ask Edge or El Zorro for it.

Oh well

Takže, jelikož je temný pán Yuuai na kempování, budu za ní suplovat.

Co už jste probraly ? Jo, sem moc línej na to abych si to přečetl.

souveti

Koukám že probraly ale ty jsi to ještě moc nepochopil. Takže my něco napiš - jestli budeš tak hodný.

Cesky , Anglicky ? Nemecky ? (to bys chtel trochu moc xD )

Jasně že anglicky ty pako. xD

Michal stared at Lucas ,with his mouth wide open. "How can he be such wierd0 ! " he thought

Taaakže - ta čárka je tam zbytečne zrovna teď.

A taky - Michael.


A ještě, když píšeš čárky tak to napiš tak že čárka je hned za slovem bez mezery.

He looked at Michael, drew his sword and said. "You will never get me."

Taky, divný se píše weird ne wierd - takže weirdo a taky nepoužívej SMS talk - U2 a tak dále - třeba jako to tvoje weird"0"

Nezapomínej na tečku na konci věty a když si něco myslíš tak to napiš kurzívou bez ťech znaků. ""

Michael stared at Lucas with his mouth wide open. How can he be such a weirdo ! He thought.

Taky, když skončí tvoje přemejšlení tak další věta taky začíná velkým písmenem.

How can he be such a weirdo ! He thought.

dooobře

Takže, ještě jednou a tentokrát pořádně.

Malý , ale taky hloupý Lukáš procházel mezi Vietnamci , jako mezi svými.
"Proč tak blbě čumí ten gádžo ! " zeptal se jeden cikán druhého... On se podrbal na své poloplešaté hlavě s třemi chlupy a jednohlasně rozhodl. "Zbijeme ho , určitě je slabej ! " A tak dva cikáni pomalým krokem putovali k hloupému Lukáškovi , zatímco on sledoval jednu z krásných Vietnamek.. "Hmm... Hentai je lepší " pomyslel si a s nelibostí odtrhl pohled , když v tom ho do obličeje udeřila tvrdá romská pěst. "Co děláš ty kokote ?! " ohradil se Lukáš a výhružně se podíval na cikány. "Ten asi neni tak slabej co Džogo ? " "Asi ne" odpověděl druhý cikán a bylo vidět jak oběma romům stékají kapky potu po čele.

Dej my jedinej dobrej důvod proč ti nenakopat tu tvoji virtualní prdel ? xD xD xD


Ja myslel anglicky ... xD

Romská pěst xD

Humm...it seems like there has been a lot going on since I was gone. Interesting. Ushishishi~

Indeed, i was .... teaching Deshiel while you were away, you may continue now. ^^

I have little doubt about your 'teaching' Gege. ><

You may have to continue for a bit, maybe for one more day. I don't feel so well....but that may be changed.